You Should Play the Violin
Shame on you,
Assonance: long a and short a sounds. Patty
my mother would say.
You have to practice
your violin.
And back to the music stand
It's easy to see someone marching, brandishing
we marched, a violin. Patty
we marched, a violin. Patty
drawing the bow
It seems she put her feelings about practicing
to make the scale shill, into the instrument, making her disgust come out.
a mosquito closing in in a note. Brooke.
to make the scale shill, into the instrument, making her disgust come out.
a mosquito closing in in a note. Brooke.
on the ear at night.
I can hear the resemblance. Jessica
I like how second stanza is aftermath of first. Eskira
And so we became a family
Simply said but it sounds right! Patty
of violinists
sawing our way toward the bone.
It sounds disgusting. I get bad images.
When one of us struck home, Horror film! Jessica
When one of us struck home, Horror film! Jessica
the others picked up the tempo.
When the music said rest
none of us did.
Soon notes flew off the clef
Alliteration of "w" sound. Patty
like birds from wires
startled by a change of weather.
Excellent simile. Ruth